DARISC |
09-15-2009 12:40 PM |
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Originally Posted by tabs
(Post 4899346)
Thus any new regulatory environment should be well thought out for the possibility of its unintended consequences.
In the above 2 sentences there is one word that absolutely denigrates intellectually a paticular persons position. Much as a torpedo would strike the hull of a ship. Which word is it and why does it have that effect?
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Easy; in the first sentence, "its", which implies that there ARE unintended consequences, which I don't think was what the writer intended to say which is "Thus any new regulatory environment should be well thought out for the possibility of unintended consequences."
While an error, I wouldn't jump to the conclusion that it's so grave as to "absolutely denigrate intellectually a paticular persons position" because I would guess that the average reader would not catch the error and would know what, I think, the writer was trying to convey.
Yes, to continue to pick the nit, one could legitimately respond to the sentence as written by asking "the possibility of its unintended consequences to do what?"
If you are saying that there is one word that occurs in both sentences, I can't see it as of yet.
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