The side shots of that design exercise are hideous. It looks like it was a reaction less griso, and more to JVB Moto's 'Flat Red' Ducati.
Short-tails on big-tanked bikes always looks like proportional crap. The headlights look like they were stolen from a crashed 1098. There's something I like about it from the 3/4 views, but there's a lot I'd change. Like stacked scrambler pipes instead of the JVB-Moto-style twin high pipes.