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Critique my car ad!
Some of you guys love this game, so I thought I'd use your expertise.
FS- 2003 325Ci Convertible It's for a BMW. Please post criticism here, thanks!
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Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Colorado, USA
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Good looking ad, the part where you disclose the minor chips in the front end, etc. is nice and a good idea. That year and model is going through the auctions now at around $14K with a little less miles.
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Thanks, I've seen the prices out there, the kbb has a $5k difference between the Private Party and Suggested Retail Values, I'm asking just above the PPV. I think the reason many are going for much lower is because of the soft market, but I have time to wait so we'll see.
I'll give it a month or two on a couple sites then I'll try eBay.
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Did you get the memo?
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Wichita, KS
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I give you a 90%, so an A-.
Information is good and comprehensive, it could use a few more pics. Pictures sell cars, pure and simple. I was left interested in seeing door panels, carpet with and without floor mats. and overall shots of each seat.
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‘07 Mazda RX8-8 Past: 911T, 911SC, Carrera, 951s, 955, 996s, 987s, 986s, 997s, BMW 5x, C36, C63, XJR, S8, Maserati Coupe, GT500, etc |
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Hmmm, so having the link to more pictures doesn't do it?
I could just upload the rest in to the ad I guess, but I was thinking about other places that wont let you put up 30 pictures. I think A- is the best grade I've ever had.
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