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Originally Posted by Hads930
(Post 7025740)
From The Houston Chronicle today:
Thrown bottle suspected in fatal crash
By Dale Lezon | Thursday, October 11, 2012
A woman died and two others were injured when a bottle may have smashed into their windshield, causing the driver to loose control and slam into a light pole early Thursday morning in southwest Houston, officials said.
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Originally Posted by red-beard
(Post 7025950)
And this is supposed to be a professional writer. I've read worse, but usually only in an Engineering Text book.
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I don't see a problem here. "Thrown bottle" is used as an indirect object in an assumed simple sentence. As in, "Someone's thrown bottle is suspected in fatal crash."
Or, more clearly, "Someone, whose thrown bottle smashed into their windshield, is suspected of causing a fatal accident." This would be using the TB as an indirect object with accident being the direct object in a complex sentence.
Really, although not technically correct, the original article conveys the thought better than either one of my sentences.
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