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it went down last night.
too much interest? Russian hackers? Hugh wiped it, like with a cloth.. ![]()
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Hugh,
Your site is not bad at all for being designed by a retired guy ![]() On mobile, the menu is not obvious, therefore a lot of your content will be missed. I recommend going to a single page format and listing all of your content on one page. Very common these days for sites with limited content. Good luck!
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Thanks Motion!
I found that same problem with my iPhone. I'll look into redesigning it.
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one more time. Single page, I'm working on the email button
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Health and safety? https://www.theregister.co.uk/2017/02/24/bofh_2017_episode_2/
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just checked, it opened OK for me. Please provide feedback.
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Nice!
Now it opens for me! Nice page Hugh! But go through it in detail. I am a guy that cringes when I see things like Hugh.rose@... Use lower case for all letters hugh.rose@... or use Hugh.Rose@... As it is now it looks like you made the page by using MS Word with autocorrect. Also, I think there should be a space after a comma. E, H&S. Maybe even better E, H & S Other things: Resume' Deja Vu' Make sure that you own the images! The one on the top looks like a stock photo, they tend to get very "nervous" if they don't get paid. Edit, added: don't underline text! Underlined text is recognized as a link! I know, links are not underlined anymore on most pages, but still, don't underline text. But overall a very clean and nice looking page! |
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Looks good though. Only critique would be to maybe re-size and inset the city-scape pic a bit. When it goes all the way to the margin, it makes you want to scroll right to "see the rest of the pic".
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What Eric said.
![]() My only critique is that you should lose the PDF resume. That is, the site is enough. --it sells you as someone that anyone would want to know. But the PDF resume linked makes you look a bit too old-school (out of touch) and maybe a bit needy.
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Thanks all, Holder, thanks for the formatting tip, you are 100% correct. Island, I'll think about the PDF thingie, I want Lawyers to be able to click and download a resume'. The images are stock photos from godadday.com so no licensing issues. I may load some industry specific images, but even thought I took the pics, I worked for Disney, so not sure about licensing.
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Hugh... I don't have my phone with me at the moment - but make 100% sure it looks really good on mobile. I bet 80% of your traffic will be in that method.
...also - it should be really easy to contact you from the page. Look at what your "competition" is doing. Be better.
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