The first draft of the ad to go in The Early S Registry magazine, ESSES, is done. We will also run it, or one similar to it, in Panorama and probably Excellence too. I'm looking for some critical thoughts on it. What do you like, what do you NOT like (this is most important) what would you change to make it better and so on. Thank you for your help!
EDIT: Image quality takes a big hit uploading here.
