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Going for constructive criticism here...
It feels like two 1/2 page ads. The top has a great photo, company name and contact info. Add a line for services rendered and it’s done.
The bottom feels disorganized - too much text, nothing that calls out exactly what you do: cadmium. chrome, suspension, grills, calipers, engine detail... are you selling parts, coatings, rebuilding services? Be specific.
It also feels difficult to find out how to contact you, reader’s eyes are not going to stop in the middle of the right edge of the page. Be conscious of where you put the website and phone number, don’t make your customer look for it.
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