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Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: state of wonder
Posts: 495
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Advertising Mistake #1:
It 'reads' visually as two half page ads.
You're paying for the whole page,
fill that page with a stunning full bleed beauty shot.
A great headline will stop page flippers.
A supporting subhead will lead the reader into the bodycopy.
You have too much bodycopy (nobody reads anymore)
The small circular photos do not convey the quality and detail of your work.
Print advertising is difficult.
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