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Non Compos Mentis
Join Date: May 2001
Location: Off the grid- Almost
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That was an awful lot of words that didn't say much.
Maybe there was an actual point towards the end, Didn't get that far.
Note to budding authors: State your main point up front, then back it up.
Starting with several paragraphs of blather does not hold the reader's attention.
Last edited by Dantilla; 02-06-2021 at 07:25 AM..
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