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Originally Posted by Bill Douglas View Post
Nice looking car.

I'd drop the $41,499. The 99 makes it look like some marketing **** is trying to make some money. $41,000 or $42,000.

I'd drop the "will buff out". I'd either buff it out, or mention it's got scratches.
This, lose that entire line at the end. "As you can see," they can see it, they don't need you to tell them about it.

Those pictures are atrocious. Someone sees the crappy photos, they think must not be that nice a car, or there would be better pictures.

Unless you catch someone who is looking for that car, you get someone looking for a BMW 3 series with AWD. Those people will say, "3 pedals, why are there 3 pedals?"
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