Just finished the book, "the Hunt Club", by John Lescroart.
OK as an adventure, crime, whodunit....but made a few mistakes.
The hero seems to be able to get a CCW in SF County despite never being an LEO. Um yeah.... they have issued 10 CCWs in 20 years in that county...
The same hero gets popped for not having his new automatic listed on his CCW...is let out w/o with a warning AND gets to keep the gun....sure...like that would ever happen in REAL life....
The anti-hero forgets to "rack a new round" after expending all rounds in the previous clip and inserting a new clip...OK.....
Most autos rack open after the last shot and it's an automatic reflex to slip the release feeding one into the tube....
Sue Grafton...lives in my hometown....she said her hero cocked the hammer back on his Glock....Glock's don't have hammers.....