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Originally Posted by Don Plumley
Make it more conversational - in the about section, use statements like, "Hi. I'm Todd Richmond and nostatic is my..." "After completing my graduate work...I explored..."
my 0.02 yen
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changed it - how's that? I usually eschew first person, but I think you're right that it comes off stilted unless it is a larger organization where there actually could be some
pr person writing the crap.
can you change that to RMB please?