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As far as the last "Billy Mays" language, I see no problem and like it...so much so that I think it should be your initial statement to set the tone for your "style" of medicine. IOW you view your patients as real people rather than just cattle you're herding thru the chute. I know my parents shopped around for neurologists for my dad and are finally pleased with one the found that was more expensive yet not in an as ornate office for the simple reason that he spent time discussing dad's problems, was not condescending and answered all their questions directly and in plain engish. They never feel like they are being rushed out so he can see someone else.

I don't know your target demographic but they might be intimidated by what appears to them to be a long read. Perhaps set up as a FAQ format? There is a lot of info about various other conditions that affect foot health (diabetes, bypass, etc...Perhaps if they could scan down FAQ's on each individual related condition they would go to that topic as it affects them.

Content wise it seems excellent...conveys you view your patients as people you want to help identify and solve problems. Suggests you look at the entire health situation rather than just your specialty.Liked the part about Saturday morning vs Sunday nite.

Link to existing site?

Anything on RLS for my wife?
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Last edited by Dueller; 10-17-2009 at 07:58 AM..
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