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It's for a big multinational corp, so i'm a bit intimidated.
It boils down to just a suit behind a desk.

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I should have all the raw materials i need, including professional quality photos.
Then lay it all out. Use point form & break it into the rough segments above. Add some positive & succinct prose around it. Make it flow. Intro. Facts. Sell. Conclude. Thank.

Print it. Read it to yourself out loud. Did it work? Did you explain the need & your unique ability to solve it? Would you buy it?

Boil it down & if you still need help, I will PM my email. But I am buried until at least Thursday. I have to go absorb knowledge, fine food & Cuban cigars in Montreal . . .

Ian
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