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Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 2000
Location: N. Phoenix AZ USA
Posts: 28,977
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Originally Posted by imcarthur
It boils down to just a suit behind a desk.
Then lay it all out. Use point form & break it into the rough segments above. Add some positive & succinct prose around it. Make it flow. Intro. Facts. Sell. Conclude. Thank.
Print it. Read it to yourself out loud. Did it work? Did you explain the need & your unique ability to solve it? Would you buy it?
Boil it down & if you still need help, I will PM my email. But I am buried until at least Thursday. I have to go absorb knowledge, fine food & Cuban cigars in Montreal . . .
Ian
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Do your proposal then get a friend or two and make your presentation to them. Tell them to pick it apart. Better to have someone you know help you "fine tune" it than stumble a couple of times when you are face to face with the person who is making the final decision.
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2021 Subaru Legacy, 2002 Dodge Ram 2500 Cummins (the workhorse), 1992 Jaguar XJ S-3 V-12 VDP (one of only 100 examples made), 1969 Jaguar XJ (been in the family since new), 1985 911 Targa backdated to 1973 RS specs with a 3.6 shoehorned in the back, 1959 Austin Healey Sprite (former SCCA H-Prod), 1995 BMW R1100RSL, 1971 & '72 BMW R75/5 "Toaster," Ural Tourist w/sidecar, 1949 Aeronca Sedan / QB
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