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i think to sell copies of this book you are going to have to have lurid pictures of scantily dressed women on the cover...I would also suggest a change in title to something more salacious and appealing.

Hmm maybe a title like ....HOW I CAME TO MURDER MY DATE...which speaks to the all around failure of spending and chatting her up...to get some...as taken from the perspective of the murderer as a failed suitor.

Hope this has helped

Oh BTW if my suggestions are used and your book does hit the NYT Best Seller list I wana cut...on this otherwise snooze patrol...Just ask Sniper how many pages he could wade through before somnolence carries him of to sand man land.