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Bill,
I listened to a couple of minutes of it. It needs to be shortened, speeded up, and all of the extra off the wall and unnecessary comments eliminated. The guys who have posted already have made some great comments. I was thinking of a professor I had who would take a paper from his students, read it, and give it back and say, "Cut it in half, but include the same information." Then he would do that a couple more times before he would accept it. It was a PITA but boy did it teach me a lot about eliminating unnecessary content. That might be a good approach for editing and improving your videos. Good on ya for doing those.
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Marv Evans
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