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Model Citizen
Join Date: May 2007
Location: The Voodoo Lounge
Posts: 19,497
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Lots of flaws in this story...
What's a slide rule?
Where was the little toolkit that comes with the bike?
Protagonist doesn't know how to change a plug, but he's an engineer? (OK, that could be true, ha ha)
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