Quote:
Originally Posted by Noah930
Nice website. But somehow that first sentence "With over 20 years..." reads a bit awkward. That bit about having "the most and the largest" feels (though technically isn't) a bit run-on-sentenceish.
|
Yes the copy needs work. I really shouldn't try to write anything after being awake for 18hrs, following a night of partying until 2...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Icemaster
Ive got a couple of professional suggestions/feedback, PM me if you'd like to talk. This looks good.
|
Sure, I'm still figuring this all out.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Icemaster
Looks good. There's some glitchiness with the photo transitions, at least in mobile format. Did you just build for pc?
|
Yes that's one thing I need to work on. I need to get all the photos formatted better. Some are landscape and some are portrait, and the template doesn't handle them well.