[MRM]

I like the silhouttes, but the lines between the horse and car don't match. The lines forming the horse are much thicker and are more in the style of of a preparatory sketch (I forgot the proper word for the free hand sketch you draw before you draw or paint the final work) while the car has thinner lines that come together more deliberately and look more like a final study. But I do really like both forms. The lines and styles are close but don't quite match. I'd put the car silhouette into the style of the horse, with more lines and loking less like a finsihed, modern design study. The hores looks like something from a cave painting and captures the spririt and form of a wild horse perfectly. I'd keep that style and modify the car to match.

The font is too modern for the drawings, but that's an easy fix. You need to simplify the name. It has one too many syllables and one too many esses. Also, be careful with the apostrophe. Is Duck Feather someone who has Horches (Duck Feather's Horches) or do duck feathers describe the horches (Duck Feathered Horches). The way you use it, Duck Feathers must be the name of your property. It's a pretty name. You should be able to use it. Just keep it simple and minimize the esses so that the name rolls off your tongue easily.