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Nice start. Your film could benefit from a cohesive soundtrack to help tell the story, For me it's too disjointed and doesn't inform me as to how I should be feeling as I watch the video. You have lots of cool footage to work with but some of your transitions just seem like "hack+blast".
Be don't be offended. Just a subjective opinion. I could be wrong. Like I said, great start!
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