Hi Milu!
And thanks a lot!
Your reply is very helpful and thorough indeed - Not hurtful at all, but exactly the kind of answer I hoped for!
I knew that the piece missed the "wild beast"-side of driving a Porsche. But it was nice to hear the beast described by a real Porsche-enthusiast.
The things I tried to focus on in this track, was pleasure and comfort - Now I'm pretty sure that the next piece needs a lot more energy.
I'm not a carenthusiast nor a sporting driver, I'm just a poor student with an interest in electronic music, and I found the project interesting: recording the sounds of a Porsche 911, and using them for making a piece of music using only the sounds I recorded.
In order to get the proper amount of theory in the project, I had to give the project the marketing-angle.
The Course I'm taking is focused on "Electronic Listening Music", so the music will have to be in the electronic genre somehow - Rock- and pop-music is not an option in this project, as I have to illustrate my knowhow with the software and effect-techniques that is the main focus of ELM and this course.
But all this doesn't excuse that the first try at making music that correlates with the feelings a Porsche evokes, misses some of the fundamental pleasures of driving a Porsche - I will have to do better, and I'm sure your reply will help me achieve that. Therefore, once again: Thank you very much for your time and your constructive reply!
Cheers!
Thomas