[Isabo]

I've listened to your piece with Milu and I pretty much agree with what he wrote above. I would add that it is a bit like trying to describe colour to a blindman, especially as it is not your interest. You are missing passion, love and lust. A Porsche 911, driven gently on a Sunday morning is like making love slowly and gently with your long time companion. Driven in anger it is pure, raw and very satisfying sex.
Note well that the porschephiles frequenting this board may not be the buyers Porsche would market too.
Expanding on what Milu wrote above; identify WHO your piece is aimed at, and for WHICH model. Then figure out how to stir the emotions.
-Isa