Well presented, clean car, good photos, good add copy.
I hate it when people show a car for sale and the carpet is filthy.
If I had to pic nits the best I could come up with would be that you could have taken the pics at a park or more scenic setting, but I don't know if it would make any difference. Prolly not.
On a serious note, is it all right if I contact you with unsolicited services or offers?