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Originally Posted by Don Ro
When I read words such as these in an ad I always feel put off. Just me, I guess.
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"If your too afraid to wrench or timid of speed, please don’t waste my time or yours by reading any further"
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"Are you man enough"
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"...all others move on"
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Very pompous words. I read it that way as well. Creative writing that left the elephant in the room. That sales tactic might work on a running bike/sports car/lifted truck.
something like this. People are more interested if you, and why you took it apart. Anything broken/not usable, reason you have an engine in pieces, ect.
Might be easier to tell people it just needs an engine, I would sleep better at night.