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A Man of Wealth and Taste
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Out there somewhere beyond the doors of perception
Posts: 51,063
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What not even one comment? I guess you all concur with the Jehovah witness lady and don't want to come near this one. Well this thread is merely a writing exercise for me and not to be taken literally, nor as the gospel truth. There is virtually no ego in this one at all.
Technically the transition of characterization from 2nd to 1st person was flawless. The conclusion you as the reader draw at the end of the 3rd paragraph is supposed to support the conclusion of the 2nd paragraph. That I'm a "whack job" to be stayed away from. In that I successfully conveyed that feeling to you the reader in this short story.
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